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Los Angeles · 2016
The Movie That Never Existed
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Los Angeles, California — 2016
The movie had never been made.
That was the one detail David Keller had neglected to mention to the man preparing to pay thirty-two million dollars for it.
The man was Richard Vale, chairman of one of Hollywood’s largest independent film companies. Above the visitor’s chair in his office hung a framed advertisement announcing a rival studio’s bankruptcy.
Vale liked to conduct negotiations beneath it.
During their first meeting, David noticed that Vale asked twice who else wanted the picture and only once whether it was any good.
The property was called The Last Picture. Supposedly, it was the final, unreleased film of Arthur Bellamy, a director who had won three Academy Awards, denounced Hollywood, and died in seclusion twenty-three years earlier.
Rumors about an unfinished last movie had circulated for decades.
The rumors were real. The movie wasn’t.
David had found the story in an old interview with Bellamy’s cinematographer. One sentence mentioned a picture the director had considered making. Nothing suggested that a camera had ever rolled.
He brought the interview to Alton.
“How much film would we need?”
Alton read the paragraph again.
“Enough to make someone want the rest.”
Six weeks before the sale, a Hollywood trade publication reported that a European investment group had acquired previously unknown Bellamy material.
The item was four paragraphs long, buried beneath a story about a studio merger. Reese had worked hard to keep it there.
Two weeks later, another publication mentioned interest from a streaming company. Then a retired film programmer told a podcast interviewer that the material might amount to a finished picture.
By the time Vale called his attorney, everybody seemed to have heard about it from somebody else.
“Find out who owns it,” Vale said.
His attorney found Carl Morthau.
Carl Morthau was Alton in a charcoal suit, representing a Swiss investment company that claimed to have acquired the film through the purchase of an estate portfolio.
Its directors wanted a quiet sale. They had no interest in becoming film distributors.
Vale wanted a screening.
Alton referred him to the company’s financial adviser, David Keller, who was using another name and had developed the useful habit of returning Vale’s calls a day late.
David declined to provide the complete picture.
Vale offered fifteen million dollars.
“The company isn’t conducting an auction,” David said.
“Then give me a price.”
“Thirty-two.”
Vale hung up.
The next morning, his attorney called back.
The first serious problem came from Helen Shaw.
Shaw was Vale’s head of acquisitions. She had spent twenty years buying films and six years explaining to Vale why wanting something did not establish that the person selling it owned it.
She sent David a list.
Ownership records. Estate documents. A complete inventory of the material. An independent examination. Access to the full picture before payment.
David took the list to Alton.
“She’s good.”
Alton read it.
“Yes.”
For twelve days, the transaction barely moved.
The company’s existence could be independently confirmed. Its claim to the film was another matter. The estate records referred to a group of production assets without identifying a completed feature. A later inventory supplied the title and a running time, but Shaw wanted to know who had prepared it and what they had actually inspected.
David supplied answers.
Shaw supplied more questions.
Vale complained about the delay.
Shaw sent him a one-page memorandum with three unresolved points. He returned it with a fourth written across the bottom:
What happens if somebody else buys it?
Meanwhile, Marcus worked on the only part of the property anybody would see.
His team had spent three weeks making a Cadillac approach a diner, a woman get out, and an old man admit something he had spent his life avoiding.
Marcus watched Bellamy’s films until he began anticipating the cuts.
Then he removed half his own.
“Too much happens,” he told David after an early screening.
“Nothing happens.”
“And we’re still rushing it.”
The finished excerpt ran three minutes and twenty-one seconds. Marcus tried shortening it, then adding a few seconds at the end. Each version was worse.
He restored the original cut.
“Two hundred and one,” he said. “That’s what we have.”
David made it the length of the seller’s authorized preview.
Shaw insisted on bringing a film conservator.
David agreed. He also disclosed that the viewing print was a recent copy, supposedly made from material held in Europe.
The conservator could inspect what they showed him. He could not authenticate a source he had never seen.
Shaw wanted access to that source.
David refused.
For a day and a half, nobody called.
Then Vale’s attorney proposed holding back part of the purchase price until delivery. Shaw wanted the entire amount retained. The seller would accept four million.
Vale approved the compromise over her written objection.
“How much gets released?” Alton asked David.
“Twenty-eight.”
“And the other four?”
“We never touch it.”
Alton sat back.
“Can you close on that?”
“I think so.”
“Then close.”
The screening took place on a Thursday evening in a private theater in Beverly Hills.
Vale arrived with his attorney, Shaw, and the conservator.
David greeted them in the lobby. His darkened hair, mustache, and dental veneers had become familiar enough that he sometimes forgot to remove the slower voice when he went home.
Reese stood beside him, representing the competing buyer.
Vale stopped.
“What’s she doing here?”
“Waiting,” David said.
“I was told this was private.”
“It is.”
Reese checked her watch.
Vale handed his coat to the attendant.
Upstairs, Marcus waited beside the projectionist. On the desk lay a cue sheet with a single instruction circled:
201 SECONDS.
Before the screening, the conservator examined the viewing print and compared several frames with the reference material he had brought.
When he returned to the lobby, Shaw approached him first.
“Well?”
“It’s a modern print, as disclosed. The image has been made to resemble an older source.”
“Made to resemble?” Vale asked.
“That could result from copying older material. It could also be deliberate. Without the source elements, I can’t distinguish the two with confidence.”
“Does it look like Bellamy?”
“That’s a different question.”
“Answer it.”
The conservator glanced at Shaw.
“It’s consistent with his work.”
Vale turned toward the auditorium.
“Let’s see it.”
David stood beside the screen.
“The preview runs three minutes and twenty-one seconds. The complete picture is listed at ninety-seven minutes.”
“Have you seen the complete picture?” Shaw asked.
“No.”
“Has anyone representing the seller?”
“The inventory was prepared before my involvement.”
“That wasn’t my question.”
Vale lowered himself into a seat.
“Helen. We can ask him afterward.”
David stepped away from the screen before she could continue.
At 9:17 p.m., the lights went down.
A deserted highway appeared at dusk.
A black Cadillac approached through the haze. There was no dialogue, only tires against asphalt and an orchestral phrase that never quite resolved.
Vale settled back.
At sixty seconds, the car stopped beside an abandoned diner.
A woman stepped out. She kept one hand on the open door and looked toward something beyond the frame.
“I knew you’d come back,” she said.
The camera held on her.
Vale leaned forward.
At ninety seconds, the screen went black.
When the picture returned, an elderly man sat at a kitchen table. Behind him, out of focus, someone passed through a doorway.
He began speaking about a house he had bought for his family.
He remembered the purchase price. He remembered arguing with a contractor about a staircase. He could describe the view from every window.
Then he tried to remember which room his daughter had slept in.
His mouth opened.
Nothing came.
Marcus had rejected seven takes before choosing that one.
Beside Vale, Shaw stopped writing.
At 147 seconds, the old man looked up.
Vale whispered, “Jesus.”
David watched him instead of the screen.
At 180 seconds, the woman stood alone in the highway. The Cadillac was moving away.
She did not follow it with her eyes.
At 201 seconds, the picture ended.
The lights rose.
Vale remained leaning forward, his hands resting on his knees.
Then he turned to David.
“We’re buying it.”
Shaw closed her notebook.
“We need a minute.”
In the lobby, Vale’s attorney opened his briefcase.
Shaw remained standing.
“We have an excerpt,” she said. “We don’t have an authenticated Bellamy film, and we don’t have evidence that a complete feature exists.”
“The seller warrants both,” David said.
“A warranty gives us a claim after we lose the money.”
Vale looked at his attorney.
“Is the chain of title good?”
“The documents support a claim to certain production assets. Helen’s point is that we haven’t independently established what those assets contain.”
“But the contract says ninety-seven minutes.”
“Yes.”
“And if they don’t deliver?”
“We pursue recovery.”
Shaw looked at Vale.
“From a company whose only substantial asset may be the thing we’re trying to buy.”
David felt his grip tighten on the back of a chair.
Reese said nothing.
“Give us until Monday,” Shaw told him. “Let someone inspect the complete material.”
He wanted to agree. Three days sounded like so little.
“The directors have accepted the closing terms,” he said. “If you want to change them, I’ll have to refer the matter back.”
“Then refer it back.”
Reese picked up her coat.
Vale turned.
“Where are you going?”
“If you’re reopening negotiations, I need to speak to my people.”
“Sit down.”
“I’ll make the call outside.”
She walked toward the doors.
“Wait.”
Reese stopped.
Vale looked through the auditorium entrance at the blank screen.
David had expected him to calculate. He had expected anger at the possibility of losing.
Instead, Vale asked, “What happens in the rest of it?”
For a moment, David had no answer.
“I haven’t seen it.”
“Right.”
Shaw stepped closer.
“Richard. We should wait.”
Reese’s phone vibrated in her hand.
Vale looked at it, then at the closing documents.
“Close it.”
His attorney did not move immediately.
“I need you to understand that we’re recommending against release.”
“I understand.”
Shaw opened her notebook again.
This time she wrote down his exact words.
The closing instructions had been arranged earlier that day. At 9:41 p.m., David’s phone displayed confirmation that Vale had authorized the release.
Twenty-eight million dollars.
For several seconds, he could not make himself put the phone away.
Vale offered his hand.
“Tell your people they should have asked for more.”
David shook it.
“I’ll spare them that.”
The delivery date arrived eleven days later.
No film appeared.
By noon, Shaw had called the storage company. By three, she had spoken to an attorney in Switzerland. The following morning, she stopped using the word “delay.”
The seller existed. The contracts existed. The records established that papers had changed hands.
They did not establish that a completed Bellamy film ever had.
The four million dollars remaining in escrow went back to Vale’s company.
The twenty-eight million did not.
Shaw stood in his office while he read the preliminary report.
Above the visitor’s chair hung the bankruptcy advertisement.
“I want everyone in that theater identified,” he said.
“They’re working on it.”
“The adviser. Start with him.”
“The name was false.”
Vale looked up.
Shaw waited.
“Say it.”
“I already did. In the lobby.”
Vale called the FBI.
Then he called his public relations director.
The second call was considerably longer.
Investigators interviewed the theater staff, collected the transaction records, and began following the money. His attorneys pursued the seller.
In private, Vale demanded action.
In public, he said nothing.
Two months later, his company issued a brief announcement. It would not be distributing The Last Picture because of unresolved questions concerning ownership and authenticity.
Shaw insisted on the word “authenticity.”
Vale argued with her for twenty minutes.
She won.
By then, David had met Alton, Reese, and Marcus for dinner on a terrace overlooking Lake Como.
For once, nobody put a folder on the table.
Marcus raised his glass.
“Twenty-eight million dollars for three minutes and twenty-one seconds.”
“Before expenses,” Reese said.
“You always do that.”
“Someone has to.”
David turned his glass between his fingers.
“Did you think he’d walk?”
“In the lobby?” Alton said. “Yes.”
“So did I.”
Across the lake, lights appeared along the shore.
“He really liked it,” David said.
Marcus looked up.
“The film. He wanted to know what happened next.”
“He wanted to own it,” Reese said.
David looked at Marcus.
“Did you ever work out what happened?”
“In the rest of the movie?”
David nodded.
Marcus put down his glass.
“No.”
For a moment, none of them spoke.
Then a waiter arrived with the wine.
In Beverly Hills, Vale approved the announcement.
Afterward, he looked at the framed bankruptcy advertisement.
He had enjoyed explaining it to people. There had always been a moment when they understood why he had hung it there, and he had enjoyed that most of all.
He called his assistant.
“Take that down.”
She lifted the frame from its hook, revealing a pale rectangle on the wall.
“Would you like something else here?”
Vale looked at the empty space.
“Find a picture.”
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A work of fiction by Jim Beach.
London · 2016
The Staircase
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London, England — October 2016
Graham Vale wanted the staircase before he knew which building it belonged to.
The photograph showed a double curve of pale stone rising around a bronze balustrade. Above it, three floors of galleries opened beneath a glass roof.
He enlarged the image on his phone.
Then enlarged it again.
“Where?”
The woman opposite him stirred her coffee.
“London.”
“I can see that. Where in London?”
“Before I give you the address, I need to know whether you’re interested in the whole package.”
Graham looked at the photograph.
“Depends on the package.”
She slid a folder across the table.
Staircase. Eight bronze lift doors. Two marble fireplaces. Forty-six meters of oak paneling. A library ceiling painted in 1908 by an artist whose name Graham recognized from an auction catalog.
He stopped turning pages.
“The ceiling too?”
“Everything listed.”
“Who owns it?”
“A company that would prefer not to have its name attached to photographs of men carrying its history into a skip.”
Graham smiled.
He understood that problem.
Three years earlier, a newspaper had photographed a carved doorway leaving one of his developments beneath a tarpaulin. Graham’s spokesman had called it conservation work.
The doorway was now in his dining room.
“Demolition?” he asked.
“Extensive redevelopment. The interior is being cleared first.”
“Listed?”
“The protections and permissions are addressed in the legal schedule.”
“That wasn’t my question.”
“No. It was the question your solicitor will ask.”
Graham liked her less for that.
He liked the staircase more.
“Price?”
“Seven point six million pounds.”
He laughed.
She waited.
“For salvage?”
“For everything in the folder, exclusive access during removal, and no competitive auction.”
“Who valued it?”
“You’re welcome to bring your own specialist.”
That helped.
“And if my specialist disagrees?”
“Then don’t buy it.”
Graham studied her.
She was perhaps forty. Dark suit. No jewelry except a watch. Her card identified her as Elena Vos, special projects.
He had met enough people with that title to know it could mean almost anything.
“Who else has seen this?”
“Two potential buyers.”
“Names.”
“You wouldn’t want me giving them yours.”
He looked again at the bronze balustrade.
“When can I see it?”
“Tomorrow morning.”
“Tonight.”
She considered him.
“I’ll ask.”
Graham closed the folder.
“And don’t send that photograph to anyone else.”
For the first time, she smiled.
“Of course.”
The building stood behind scaffolding in a narrow street south of the river. Graham had passed it before without noticing. Most people had.
The exterior was Portland stone darkened by a century of weather. A former assurance company’s headquarters, according to the research his assistant completed between lunch and four.
Empty for fourteen months. Sold twice in six years. A planning application so large that his solicitor had refused to describe it over the telephone.
At 7:14, a security guard checked Graham’s name against a visitor list and admitted him through the side entrance.
Elena waited beneath temporary lighting.
Beside her stood a man Graham recognized immediately.
“Beauchamp?”
Alton extended his hand.
“Mr. Vale.”
“You’re doing this building?”
“I’m looking at what can be done with it.”
“Quite a difference.”
“Usually.”
Graham glanced at Elena.
She had not mentioned a famous architect.
That was either modesty or excellent salesmanship.
Alton wore an old coat and carried a rolled drawing. No entourage. No photographer. Graham approved.
“She showed you the inventory?”
“I want to see the staircase.”
“I thought you might.”
They passed through a pair of temporary doors.
Graham stopped.
The photograph had been inadequate.
The staircase rose through the center of the building, two flights dividing around a landing before returning to meet beneath the first gallery. Bronze leaves curled around the balustrade. At its base, the stone had worn into shallow hollows beneath generations of shoes.
He walked toward it without speaking.
Alton remained beside the doors.
“The curve is quite clever,” he said.
Graham touched the handrail.
“I can see that.”
“It isn’t a symmetrical curve. The second flight tightens slightly. Otherwise the upper landing would cut into the principal office.”
Graham looked up.
He had not seen that.
“Who designed it?”
Alton named the architect.
Graham nodded as though confirming something he already knew.
“And it can come out?”
“Anything can come out. The useful question is what you still have afterward.”
“I have people who do this.”
“I’m sure.”
They climbed to the first gallery.
Graham photographed the bronze doors. The fireplaces. The library.
In the principal office he stood beneath the painted ceiling for almost a minute.
“This would fit.”
Alton looked at him.
“Where?”
“I’m building a house.”
“How large?”
“Large enough.”
Alton looked back toward the ceiling.
Graham noticed the expression.
“You disapprove?”
“Of the house? I haven’t seen it.”
“Of removing this.”
“You asked whether it would fit.”
“And?”
“You haven’t told me the dimensions.”
Elena looked down at her notes.
Graham decided he disliked both of them slightly.
It did not affect the purchase.
His specialist came the following morning.
Then his solicitor.
The specialist spent forty minutes with the staircase and nearly an hour in the library. He verified the age of the bronze, examined repairs in the stone, and found an old photograph showing the ceiling before its last cleaning.
“It’s genuine,” he told Graham.
“I know.”
“Not everything people offer you is.”
Graham ignored that.
“Value?”
“Separated? Difficult. Reinstalled properly, in the right setting, substantial.”
“Seven point six?”
“Including everything?”
“Yes.”
The specialist looked toward the upper gallery.
“You would need to budget considerably more to remove and reinstall it.”
“That wasn’t my question.”
“No,” the specialist said. “It never is.”
His solicitor had more questions.
She wanted evidence that the seller could dispose of the items. Permission for removal. Confirmation that the objects were not excluded from the proposed works. A clear description of what Graham was actually buying.
Elena supplied a large document package.
The solicitor read it.
Then asked for more.
Graham began calling every two hours.
By Thursday afternoon, she sounded tired of him.
“The materials need further verification.”
“What materials?”
“The seller’s authority, principally.”
“The owner has an architect inside the building and a legal team writing the agreement.”
“That doesn’t answer the question.”
“What would?”
“Independent confirmation from the registered owner.”
“Then get it.”
“We have requested it.”
“How long?”
“As long as it takes.”
He ended the call.
Six minutes later, Elena called.
“I need to know whether you’re proceeding.”
“My solicitor is being thorough.”
“She should be.”
“Then give her time.”
“You can have the time. I can’t promise you’ll still have the package.”
Graham looked at the photographs on his desk.
“I told you not to circulate it.”
“I haven’t. The other buyer saw it before you did.”
“Who?”
“I can’t give you that.”
“At least tell me whether he’s British.”
A pause.
“No.”
Graham pictured the staircase in a hotel lobby somewhere he would have to fly to see it.
He disliked the image intensely.
“What has he offered?”
“I’m not conducting an auction.”
“Then stop making it feel like one.”
“I have a buyer willing to proceed and a buyer still considering it. I need to make a decision.”
Graham stood.
“Eight.”
Silence.
“Eight million. Subject to the agreed inventory.”
“That isn’t necessary.”
“Then you won’t have difficulty accepting it.”
He could hear her writing.
That was satisfying.
“I’ll have the amended agreement sent to your solicitor.”
“And the other buyer?”
“I’ll tell him it’s unavailable once the purchase is complete.”
Graham looked again at the ceiling.
“Good.”
His solicitor advised against completing that week.
She put it in writing.
Graham replied that he understood.
Then instructed her to release the purchase funds following the agreed closing arrangements.
She telephoned.
He answered on the fourth ring.
“I need you to hear me say this,” she told him.
“I’ve read your email.”
“We have not independently verified the seller’s authority.”
“Noted.”
“Graham.”
“I am not paying you to decide which opportunities I am allowed to take.”
She was quiet.
Then, “You are paying me to tell you when an opportunity may not exist.”
He looked toward the staircase photograph.
“I’ve stood on it.”
“That isn’t the opportunity I mean.”
He told her to proceed.
The money left on Friday.
Elena confirmed receipt that afternoon. Removal could begin Monday at eight. The building team would require the contractor’s details in advance.
Graham sent them immediately.
Then he opened a bottle he had been saving and telephoned the designer working on his house.
“I’ve solved the entrance hall.”
At 8:03 on Monday, six men in protective clothing stood outside the side entrance beside a truck carrying enough equipment to dismantle a small church.
The security guard looked at their papers.
Then at the truck.
“You’re here to do what?”
The foreman explained.
The guard called the building manager.
The building manager called the owner.
At 8:19, Graham’s phone rang.
At 8:24, he told his driver to turn around.
At 8:51, he stood beneath the staircase with the building manager, his solicitor, his foreman, and a woman representing the registered owner.
Nobody looked impressed by his arrival.
He opened the folder.
“I have an agreement.”
The owner’s representative examined the first page.
“With whom?”
“It’s there.”
“That company doesn’t own this building.”
“It represents the people who do.”
“No.”
Graham looked at his solicitor.
She did not look away.
“We asked for independent confirmation,” she said.
“I have photographs. Inventories. Access. Your security let me in three times.”
The building manager nodded.
“For a measured survey.”
“What?”
“The architectural team booked a measured survey. They supplied names, insurance, the scope of their work. Nothing about removing anything.”
Graham looked up at the staircase.
“It’s being demolished.”
The owner’s representative frowned.
“No, it isn’t.”
“Redeveloped.”
“Converted. The historic interior is central to the project.”
She pointed toward a temporary board beside the doors.
Graham had walked past it three times.
A drawing showed the restored staircase beneath a cleaned glass roof. Beneath it, a photograph of a crowded public room.
ARCHITECTURAL HERITAGE TRUST.
A campaign for public access.
Graham turned back.
“Where is Elena Vos?”
Nobody answered.
“Beauchamp?”
The owner’s representative recognized the name.
“Alton Beauchamp?”
“He was here.”
“Yes. He’s helping us with the conservation proposal.”
“He showed me the staircase.”
“It’s a remarkable staircase.”
Graham’s solicitor closed the folder.
“We need to speak privately.”
“No. We need the police.”
“We need both.”
His foreman cleared his throat.
“Mr. Vale?”
“What?”
“Do you still want us to wait?”
Graham looked at the truck outside.
Protective blankets. Lifting equipment. Empty crates with his name on the labels.
“No.”
“Where do we take everything?”
For once, Graham had no answer.
Across London, Alton stood before a large architectural model while Marcus examined his phone.
“They’ve arrived.”
Alton looked up.
“All of them?”
“Him. His solicitor. His removal crew.”
“Any damage?”
“Nothing touched.”
Alton nodded.
Reese sat on the edge of the conference table.
“I wish I’d seen his face.”
“No,” Marcus said.
“I didn’t say I’d go.”
“You were thinking it.”
She smiled.
Alton returned to the model.
Marcus watched him.
“He’ll call the police.”
“He should.”
“His solicitor warned him.”
“That doesn’t make him less entitled to report a theft.”
Reese looked between them.
“We’ve become very respectful of procedure for people who just sold someone else’s staircase.”
Alton lifted a small section of the model’s roof.
“We didn’t sell the staircase.”
“Graham thinks we did.”
“Graham paid a company with no authority to sell it.”
Marcus looked at him.
“That distinction may not improve your sentence.”
“I wasn’t suggesting it would.”
Reese slid off the table.
“Did he really offer another four hundred thousand?”
“Yes.”
“Without being asked?”
“Yes.”
She shook her head.
“I like him.”
“You wouldn’t,” Alton said.
“I like that part of him.”
Marcus put away the phone.
“The building keeps everything.”
Alton replaced the model’s roof.
“Good.”
“The trust still needs funding.”
“I know.”
Reese looked at him.
“No heroic speeches?”
“No.”
“No lesson about preserving history?”
“No.”
Marcus picked up his notebook.
“Excellent. Because we still stole eight million pounds.”
Alton looked toward the model.
“Yes.”
For a moment, none of them spoke.
Then Reese said, “And he doesn’t even get a doorknob.”
At the building, Graham stood beside the bronze handrail while his solicitor spoke to the police.
A constable asked him not to leave.
Graham looked toward the staircase.
On Friday, he had imagined it taken apart, labeled, wrapped, and delivered to his new house.
Now the afternoon light moved through the glass roof and reached the stone exactly where the original architect had intended.
A woman from the trust walked past carrying a box of old photographs.
She noticed him looking.
“Beautiful, isn’t it?”
Graham said nothing.
“We’re hoping people will be able to come inside and see it.”
She continued toward the office.
He stood there a little longer.
Then took his hand off the rail.
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A work of fiction by Jim Beach.
Singapore · 2019
The Last Course
Read story · 7 min
Singapore — September 12, 2019 — 8:41 P.M.
Gabriel Blank had chosen the seats because everyone entering the restaurant would see his wife’s necklace before they saw him.
Fifteen million dollars. He had corrected the magazine twice.
The restaurant occupied the top floor of a private club overlooking Marina Bay. Twelve seats at a pale wooden counter. No menu. No photographs. Reservations obtained through people who preferred not to explain whom they knew.
Gabriel had spent three years trying to become one of those people.
In London, he was a film producer. In Los Angeles, he was a financier when a film succeeded and an executive producer when it did not. In Singapore, he intended to become indispensable.
He financed festivals. Bought tables. Promised introductions. He liked being photographed beside people whose names appeared above his in the newspaper.
Celia had become very good at standing in the right place.
Tonight, she had stopped smiling.
“You could make an effort,” he said quietly.
She looked at him. “I came.”
“That isn’t the same thing.”
The chef placed two small dishes before them. Dark jacket. White apron. A watch almost concealed beneath his cuff.
Gabriel glanced at the fish. “What is it?”
“Your next course.”
“That wasn’t my question.”
“No, sir.”
Celia almost smiled.
Gabriel noticed. “Something amusing?”
“No.”
“Then perhaps don’t look amused.”
The chef returned to his work.
There had been stories about Gabriel long before Singapore. Stories from his twenties, when he had somehow moved from carrying equipment to controlling the company that owned it. Stories about missing partners and the financing of his first successful picture.
His preference for much younger men was public. How he treated people who depended on him was discussed more quietly.
Celia was the person expected to stand beside him after every story.
She lifted her chopsticks.
Gabriel began describing a meeting with a minister who had, in fact, sent an assistant.
Then the chef placed a folded white cloth beside her dish.
Celia put down her chopsticks.
Precisely. Side by side on the ceramic rest.
Gabriel continued speaking.
“Celia?”
She was looking at the pale wall behind the chef.
“Did you hear me?”
He touched her elbow.
Nothing.
Her lips were slightly parted. Her hands rested in her lap. He waited for her to turn, to answer, to do anything that would make the moment ordinary again.
“Celia.”
She blinked once. Slowly. Her gaze remained fixed ahead.
Gabriel stood so quickly that his stool struck the counter behind him.
“Something’s wrong.”
The chef looked up.
“Please sit down, Mr. Blank.”
“My wife.”
“I can see her.”
“Then call someone.”
A server passed behind them carrying an empty tray.
“Get a doctor,” Gabriel said.
She collected his fallen napkin and continued walking.
“Did you hear me?”
The chef laid his knife flat on the board.
“Lower your voice.”
Gabriel stared at him. “Are you insane?”
“No, sir.”
“My wife can’t move.”
“I know.”
For a moment Gabriel heard only water running behind the counter.
“What did you say?”
The chef folded another cloth.
“You have been very mean to your wife.”
Gabriel looked from him to Celia.
“What?”
“You humiliate her in front of people. You correct her when she is right. You make her apologize when you are wrong.”
A tear gathered at the corner of Celia’s eye.
Gabriel watched it move down her cheek.
“She can hear us?”
“Yes.”
He leaned close. “Darling?”
She did not answer.
Gabriel reached into his jacket.
“You may call whoever you like,” the chef said. “First, you should understand what is happening.”
Gabriel stopped with the phone in his hand.
“What have you done to her?”
“Have you heard of fugu poisoning?”
Gabriel looked at her empty dish.
“Blowfish?”
The chef said nothing.
“You gave her poison?”
“If you want her to leave here alive, listen carefully.”
The chef placed a small, sealed container on the counter.
Gabriel reached for it.
The chef rested one finger on the lid.
“Sit down.”
He sat.
“You will stop embarrassing her. You will stop using her as the respectable part of your life. And if she wants to leave you, you will let her.”
Gabriel nodded.
“Yes. Anything.”
“Not anything. Those things.”
“Yes.”
Another tear reached Celia’s chin.
Gabriel lifted his napkin and gently touched it beneath her eye.
The chef waited until he had finished.
“Beautiful necklace.”
Gabriel’s hand stopped.
“No.”
The chef said nothing.
Gabriel looked down at the diamonds. The central stone rested just above Celia’s collarbone, positioned for every photograph he had arranged that evening.
“That belongs to her.”
“Yes,” the chef said. “It does.”
“You want it.”
“Why don’t you donate it to charity?”
Gabriel stared at him.
“What charity?”
“One that helps women leave homes where they are afraid.”
“This is robbery.”
The chef did not argue.
At the other end of the counter, a couple continued eating. A server poured wine. Somewhere a man laughed at something on his phone.
Gabriel turned back to Celia.
She was crying without making a sound.
He put his phone down.
“All right.”
The chef waited.
“Take it.”
“Please remove it carefully.”
Gabriel moved behind her. The clasp took him two attempts. His hands shook badly enough that he rested them briefly against her shoulders.
“I’m sorry,” he whispered.
The necklace came free.
He laid it on the counter. A white napkin appeared beneath it before the diamonds touched the wood.
The chef folded the corners over.
“Thank you.”
“The antidote.”
The chef pushed the container toward him.
Gabriel opened it.
“On her gums,” the chef said.
Gabriel obeyed, one hand supporting her chin. Then he stayed beside her, watching her face.
“How long?”
The chef glanced at the clock.
Gabriel hated him for that.
“How long?”
“Talk to her.”
Gabriel bent toward his wife.
“Celia. I’m here.”
Nothing.
“I’m here, darling.”
He looked toward the chef, who was washing his hands.
“I don’t know what to say.”
For the first time that evening, nobody corrected him.
Celia’s fingers moved against her plate.
Gabriel gripped the counter.
“Celia?”
She drew a deeper breath and slowly turned her head toward him.
A server placed water beside her.
Gabriel reached for her face.
“Don’t,” she whispered.
He stopped.
For several seconds they looked at each other.
Then he lowered his hands.
The chef returned carrying a leather folder.
Gabriel stared at it.
“What is that?”
“Your bill, sir.”
“You cannot possibly be serious.”
The chef opened the folder.
Dinner for two. Wine. Service. Tax.
Everything itemized.
Gabriel looked toward the folded napkin. It was gone.
“You took fifteen million dollars.”
“The necklace was a donation.”
“And now you want me to pay for dinner. I suggest you tip well.”
“Yes, sir.”
Gabriel looked at Celia.
She was holding the water with both hands. Still trembling. But holding it herself.
He took out his card.
The chef brought the terminal.
“Did you enjoy your meal?”
Gabriel said nothing.
Celia set down the glass. “No.”
The chef inclined his head. “I’m sorry to hear that, madam.”
The payment went through.
Gabriel stood. “I’m taking you to a hospital.”
“Get the car,” Celia said.
“I’m not leaving you here.”
She looked at him.
For once, he did not explain what she wanted.
“I’ll bring it to the entrance.”
He took his phone and walked toward the lifts. A server followed at a discreet distance.
Celia waited until the doors closed. Then she let out a long breath and rubbed her stiff neck. “Was I convincing?”
The chef looked toward the payment terminal. “He paid.”
She almost laughed. “Not what I asked.”
“Yes, madam.”
He placed the small container beside her glass. She looked at it.
“Sugar water?”
“As agreed.”
There had been no fugu. No poison. No antidote.
Three weeks earlier, Celia had sat opposite the same man in an office above a shipping company. She had brought photographs, the necklace’s valuation, and a list of organizations providing shelter and legal assistance to women leaving abusive relationships.
The necklace was hers. She had the documents. Gabriel nevertheless kept it in his safe and decided when she wore it.
Tonight, she had wanted him to take it off himself.
“The foundation?” she asked.
“Your solicitor has the instructions. Independent sale. Proceeds to the organizations you selected.”
“All of it.”
“All of it.”
She nodded.
“And the other car?”
“Waiting at the service entrance. Your sister is already at the hotel.”
Celia touched the bare place above her collarbone.
When the chef had described her marriage, she had nearly turned toward him. Not because he had said anything she hadn’t told him. Because someone had finally said it where Gabriel had to listen.
Those tears had not required rehearsal.
A server appeared beside her.
“Whenever you’re ready, madam.”
Celia stood. Her legs were steady.
At the end of the counter, the couple who had continued eating put down their chopsticks. The woman met her eyes and smiled.
Celia smiled back.
She followed the server through a door Gabriel had never noticed.
Outside the main entrance, he waited beside the car, one hand on the open passenger door.
For once, he was standing in the right place.
She simply wasn’t coming.
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A work of fiction by Jim Beach.
Riyadh · 2021
The Commission
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Riyadh, Saudi Arabia — January 21, 2021 — 8:17 P.M.
Nabil Haddad knew the contract was real because the photograph had already appeared on three news sites.
Four men behind a table. Four pens. A model of a processing facility none of them would ever visit wearing ordinary shoes.
Nine hundred million dollars.
Nabil was not in the photograph.
That was disappointing, but necessary. His work occurred before photographs.
He knew which introduction mattered. Which objection was serious. Which objection required another dinner. He could explain why a tender needed revising without ever suggesting that someone had already decided who should win it.
His company described this as strategic advisory services.
His wife called it knowing people.
Both descriptions had made them wealthy.
Tonight, a private dining room on the upper floor of a Riyadh hotel held fourteen people who knew exactly how much they owed him and intended to forget it before dessert.
Nabil sat beside the chairman of Meridian Process Systems. The project director sat opposite. Lawyers occupied the far end of the table, speaking quietly over documents they should have left upstairs.
The chairman raised his water glass.
“To a successful partnership.”
Nabil raised his.
“And to the people who made it possible.”
The chairman smiled without looking at him.
They had discussed Nabil’s commission that afternoon. Six point eight million dollars. Fully disclosed. Properly invoiced. Payable to Haddad Strategic Advisory.
That was the small commission.
The other one had already cleared.
Eighteen point four million dollars rested in a company Nabil owned through arrangements his wife had never asked him to explain.
Some of it was his.
Some belonged to a man whose name had never appeared on a Meridian document.
The distinction mattered enormously to Nabil and not at all to his bank.
A waiter leaned close.
“Mr. Haddad? A gentleman would like a moment.”
Nabil looked toward the door.
A man stood beside the private room’s reception desk. Navy suit. White shirt. No tie. The right clothes for someone whose importance had not yet been established.
“Who?”
“He said it concerns the closing reconciliation.”
Nabil glanced toward the lawyers.
Still talking.
“Tell him tomorrow.”
The waiter hesitated.
“He mentioned Thursday’s variation.”
Nabil put down his glass.
There had been no variation on Thursday.
Not officially.
He rose.
“Excuse me.”
The chairman barely paused his conversation.
That would bother Nabil later.
For now, he walked toward the reception desk.
The man smiled.
“Congratulations.”
“Who are you?”
“Someone hoping to finish a small piece of business before everyone goes home.”
“Which business?”
The man took a slim folder from the desk.
“The second commission.”
Nabil looked back toward the dining room.
Nobody was watching.
“There isn’t one.”
“Then this should be easy.”
He opened the folder.
One page. Three dates. Three amounts.
Nabil recognized all three.
He did not touch it.
“Where did you get that?”
“Would you like to sit?”
A small seating area stood beyond a decorative screen. Two chairs. A low table. A vase containing branches arranged to look expensive.
Nabil remained standing.
“I asked you a question.”
“I heard it.”
“And?”
“I thought you might prefer to ask the next one somewhere quieter.”
Nabil looked at the page again.
Then sat.
The man took the opposite chair.
Through the screen, Nabil could see the chairman laughing. His laugh carried. It always had.
“You have stolen commercial information.”
“Possibly.”
“That is a crime.”
“Yes.”
The agreement unsettled him.
“I can call security.”
“You can.”
“The police.”
“Certainly.”
“My lawyers are in that room.”
“Then you won’t have to wait long.”
Nabil looked toward them.
One had opened a laptop beside his dessert plate.
The man slid a second page across the table.
A photograph of a handwritten note.
Nabil knew the handwriting before he read the words.
His own.
Below the date, he had written: NO NAMES IN THE AGREEMENT.
He remembered folding that note. Passing it across a desk. Watching the recipient place it inside a leather folio.
He had felt very careful.
“Who gave you this?”
“Does it change what it says?”
“It changes a great deal.”
“For the person you’re going to blame.”
Nabil looked up sharply.
The man waited.
“What do you want?”
“Eighteen point four million dollars.”
Nabil laughed.
It was not a convincing laugh.
“You cannot be serious.”
“I am.”
“That money isn’t all mine.”
“I understand.”
“No. You don’t.”
The man placed a third page beside the first two.
This one contained a name.
Nabil stopped speaking.
Beyond the screen, a waiter asked whether anyone wanted more coffee.
Nabil looked at the name.
“You should put that away.”
The man closed the folder.
“Thank you.”
“That wasn’t advice.”
“I took it as advice.”
For several seconds, Nabil listened to the dinner continuing without him.
“You think you can steal from these people and walk out of this hotel?”
“I’m speaking with you.”
“You have no idea what happens if that money doesn’t arrive where it’s supposed to.”
“Then I imagine you’ll replace it.”
Nabil stared.
“Replace eighteen million dollars?”
“Eighteen point four.”
“With what?”
The man glanced toward Nabil’s watch.
Then deliberately looked away.
Nabil covered it with his cuff.
“You know nothing about my finances.”
“Enough to know this is possible.”
“Possible isn’t reasonable.”
“No.”
The man gave him a moment.
Nabil studied his face. Not young. Not old. Nothing distinctive enough to help afterward.
“Are you working for Meridian?”
“No.”
“A competitor?”
“No.”
“A government?”
“No.”
“Then what gives you the right?”
“Nothing.”
That answer landed harder than the others.
“You’re admitting this is extortion.”
“Yes.”
“You say that very comfortably.”
“Would another word make it better?”
Nabil looked toward the dining room again.
For years, he had been able to summon help by naming someone important. Tonight, every important person he could name was another person who must not hear the problem.
“What happens if I refuse?”
The man opened the folder just far enough to remove a sealed envelope.
Across the front was the name of Meridian’s general counsel.
Nabil read it.
“What is that?”
“Enough for her to begin asking questions.”
“You have copies.”
“Yes.”
“Then paying doesn’t solve anything.”
“It doesn’t make the records disappear.”
“Then why would I pay?”
“Because I won’t distribute them if you do.”
Nabil shook his head.
“And next month?”
“There won’t be a next month.”
“Everyone says that.”
“I know.”
“You expect me to trust you?”
“I expect you to decide.”
A burst of laughter came from the table.
The chairman had begun telling Nabil’s story about the minister.
He was telling it better.
Nabil took out his phone.
The man remained still.
“I’m calling my banker.”
“Of course.”
“You don’t get to tell me how to do that.”
“I wasn’t going to.”
Nabil stood and moved several steps away.
His private banker answered promptly. Nabil disliked him for sounding pleased.
“I need to authorize a settlement.”
He listened.
“Tonight.”
Another pause.
“Yes, I understand what time it is.”
The banker asked questions. Nabil answered some. Repeated himself. Walked to the window. Returned.
The suited man supplied the destination through the bank’s requested process and then sat with his hands loosely folded while Nabil spoke.
Nothing happened quickly.
There were checks. A return call. An instruction that needed correcting. Nabil snapped at someone, apologized, and discovered that apologizing did not make the process move faster.
A waiter approached.
“Mr. Haddad? They’re asking whether you’ll be returning.”
Nabil covered the phone.
“Tell them I’m resolving a contractual matter.”
“Of course, sir.”
The suited man looked down at the folder.
Nabil waited until the waiter had gone.
“Something funny?”
“No.”
“You smiled.”
“I apologize.”
Nabil returned to the call.
Fourteen minutes later, his banker asked him for a final confirmation.
He looked at the man across the table.
The man gave him no encouragement.
No threat.
Nabil looked toward the lawyers.
Then the chairman.
Then the sealed envelope.
“Yes,” he said. “I authorize it.”
When the call ended, his shirt clung to his back.
“Now what?”
“We wait for confirmation.”
“You have it.”
“Your bank has your instruction. That isn’t the same thing.”
Nabil sat heavily.
For several minutes neither spoke.
It was the longest time Nabil could remember spending with someone who wanted neither his introductions nor his approval.
Finally, he said, “The project is real.”
The man looked up.
“I know.”
“The engineering. The equipment. The jobs. People will build it. People will work there.”
“Yes.”
“You make it sound like the whole thing is corrupt.”
“I haven’t said that.”
“I helped it happen.”
“You sent yourself an invoice for that.”
Nabil glanced at the folder.
“And you’re keeping the legitimate commission,” the man said.
“How generous.”
He regretted saying it. The man did not seem offended.
“If you wanted justice, you would give those papers to the authorities.”
“Yes.”
Nabil waited for an explanation.
None came.
“So don’t pretend you’re better than me.”
“I haven’t.”
That left them with nothing to discuss.
The man’s phone vibrated.
He read the screen once.
“Thank you.”
Nabil leaned forward.
“That’s it?”
“That’s it.”
The man put the envelope back inside the folder.
“The papers.”
“Stay with me.”
“You promised.”
“I promised not to distribute them.”
“And I’m supposed to live with that?”
The man stood.
“Apparently.”
Nabil remained seated.
“Where does it go?”
“The money?”
“Yes.”
For the first time, the man appeared to consider whether to answer.
“Somewhere it can be seen.”
“What does that mean?”
“Enjoy the rest of your evening, Mr. Haddad.”
He picked up the folder.
Nabil rose halfway from his chair.
“You stole my commission.”
The man looked back.
“Which one?”
Then he walked toward the lifts.
Nabil watched the doors close.
He could still call security. The police. The general counsel sitting thirty feet away.
Instead, he straightened his jacket and returned to dinner.
The chairman looked up.
“Everything all right?”
“Yes.”
“You were gone a while.”
“A settlement issue.”
“Resolved?”
Nabil picked up his water.
“Resolved.”
Across the table, the project director pushed a document toward him.
“One last thing. Compliance wants confirmation that all intermediary payments have been disclosed.”
Nabil looked at the signature line.
Six point eight million dollars. Properly invoiced. Fully disclosed.
The other commission no longer sat in his account.
He signed.
The chairman raised his glass again.
“To transparency.”
Nabil raised his.
This time, he did not add anything.
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A work of fiction by Jim Beach.